embellished the docs a bit

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diff --git a/doc/additional/pd-msg/3.pdscript/README b/doc/additional/pd-msg/3.pdscript/README
index dbfc7054..f5831b48 100755
--- a/doc/additional/pd-msg/3.pdscript/README
+++ b/doc/additional/pd-msg/3.pdscript/README
@@ -1,16 +1,21 @@
-This is a short example how to "script" a pd patch

-with pd commands.

+This is a short example how to "script" a Pd patch with pd commands.

+You will need to have 'pdsend' installed, which is a command line 

+tool for sending messages to Pd.  There is one included in this

+directory which might work for you.

 

-First start pd

-# pd lisp.pd

+First start Pd with the patch "lispg.pd".  It has a [netreceive 3005]

+object in it which allows the patch to receive messages on port 3005.

 

-Then either start the automated shell script

-# ./test.sh

+# pd -open lisp.pd

 

-or pipe the pd commands to pdsend directly:

+Then either start the automated shell script:

+

+# sh ./test.sh

+

+or pipe the Pd commands to 'pdsend' directly:

 

 # pdsend 3005 < test.txt

 

-Read through text.txt for further explanations

+Read through test.txt for further explanations.

 

 Guenter

diff --git a/doc/additional/pd-msg/3.pdscript/test.sh b/doc/additional/pd-msg/3.pdscript/test.sh
index 107d3ec0..27b4b5e5 100755
--- a/doc/additional/pd-msg/3.pdscript/test.sh
+++ b/doc/additional/pd-msg/3.pdscript/test.sh
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ PORT=3005
 

 function setfreq() 

 {

-./pdsend $PORT <<EOF

+pdsend $PORT <<EOF

 freq $1 $2;

 EOF

 }